I see typos. And so I must post.
Panel 2: office BBQ -> officer BBQ
Panel 2: stil alive -> still alive
Panel 3: hopsital -> hospital
Panel 3: Damn, your deal! -> Damn your deal! (With the comma it sounds more like “Damn, I forgot!” rather than damning the deal, which seems to be what’s happening.)
Dear Lord I screwed the pooch on that one! Fixed!
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