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   Gillsing

   August 9, 2012, 6:05 pm | # | Login to Reply

   I see typos. And so I must post.

   Panel 2: office BBQ -> officer BBQ
   Panel 2: stil alive -> still alive
   Panel 3: hopsital -> hospital
   Panel 3: Damn, your deal! -> Damn your deal! (With the comma it sounds more like “Damn, I forgot!” rather than damning the deal, which seems to be what’s happening.)

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     Tony DiGerolamo

     August 9, 2012, 11:37 pm | # | Login to Reply

     Dear Lord I screwed the pooch on that one! Fixed!